Deadlock Victim

Be Kind, This is OLD!

I wrote this as a freshman in high school, over 15 years ago! It is cheesy and corny, but I got a good grade on it, and figured I'd open it up to the ridicule of the Victim.
Enjoy!
 
Dark Forces
Crime permeates the society in the year 2369. The police force is not well enough equipped or manned to deal with the problem. The city’s council has repeatedly struck down plans to improve the police department.
Until this past year crime has effectively controlled the city through intimidation and payoffs. A lone person, blessed with superhuman powers of telekinesis and strength as well as an incredibly foreboding presence, has single-handedly reversed the city’s worsening condition. No one, except those few to whom he confides himself, know who he is, for he wears a mask and does not speak often. To the populace of the city he is known only as the Hero. His true name is Ray, which he uses when at his base of operations.
In just a few short months, he has captured more criminals than the police have caught in the past five years. The council is regaining control as Ray strikes fear into the hearts of evil doers.
Ray is a member of an intergalactic peace keeping organization called Dark Force. Their agents use their fantastic powers to keep peace and prevent war and crime, which could threaten the safety of the universe. This group also keeps a low profile and to most people their very existence is a mere rumor.
The criminal activity in this city of Earth is beginning to spread across the planet. If this continues it stands a good chance of spreading to other planets, jeopardizing the peace being maintained by the Dark Force.
The work by Ray on Earth is effectively neutralizing the threat that crime poses to the intergalactic peace.
The tactics they use are inborn talents they have learned to use in this battle since their birth. They have harnessed and trained using their unique powers for good when they could have just as easily turned to crime.
Ray’s job on Earth is nearly done. He has already imprisoned the most dangerous crime lords. All that is left is the roundup of all the criminals working under those lords.
Crime as we know it now is nearly over. Peace is no longer in jeopardy due to the hard work and determination of Ray and his comrades in the Dark Force.

posted by Chris @ 11:53 PM